Parents Guide to Writing Private High School Application Essays

Your teenager's entrance into private high schoolhas performed well in elementary school and we
cannot be taken for granted. With public schools besetbelieve that he will bring that interest and aptitude to his
with a variety of problems - discipline, poor test results,high school studies. His current teachers note that
safety - private high schools offer your child a qualityTommy regularly asks thoughtful and insightful
education in a safe environment.questions in class. In addition to working hard to
When you request an information package from aperform well academically, Tommy will be an willing
private high school, you will discover that essays andparticipant in the school's baseball team and/or its
short answer essays are required from both you andmarching band. Tommy keeps a busy schedule during
your teenager. Your teen, who should be comfortablethe school year and as a well rounded and serious
with answering essay style questions will be askedyoung man, he will represent the ideals and message
about his academic strengths and weaknesses, hisof the XYZ School now and in the future.
desire to attend the private school and about hisFamily Stability and Religious Questions
hobbies and extra-curricular activities. QuestionsOther questions will more directly ask you about your
directed to parents, however, often have a differentfuture participation in school fund raising and other
focus and are designed with different purposes inactivities. These questions are designed to evaluate
mind.the stability of your home life and your future financial
Usually, the essay questions directed to parents aresupport potential. For example a religious school
analytical in nature. Instead of asking for facts, theseapplication might ask about the role your religion plays
questions ask you to speak about your teensin your life. A non-religious school might ask why you
character, to discuss family dynamics and to gaugeare considering the XYZ School. Here is a sample
your role as a supporter of the private school. Privateanswer to this type of question:
high school admittance directors recognize thatOur family is an active member of XYZ church. We
teenagers who are brought up in a stable, educationare active members of the social action committee
focused home, are much more likely to succeed thanand every Thanksgiving, our entire family, including
their peers who have less support at home.Tommy and his two sisters, volunteer at the XYZ
Similarly, private school administrators look at yourChurch gently used clothing center where we help
essay answers to determine whether you can bedistribute gently used clothes to homeless people.
counted on to support the high school financially orTommy and his sisters have been greatly impacted by
through volunteer work. As you might imagine,this activity as well as other church related functions.
administrators cannot legally or ethically ask some ofWith a hands-on opportunity to minister to the less
these questions but they can draw inferences basedfortunate, Tommy has a personal understanding of the
on your answers to application questions.message of XYZ religion. We try to reinforce that
Analytical Questionsmessage at home by attending services regularly and
For example, an entrance application question may askmaking daily prayer a part of our routine. At the XYZ
what you believe your child can contribute to the XYZPrivate Elementary School, both my husband and I
school. This type of question is really asking you tohave served on the Board of Directors and we are
speak to your child's academic, social, athletic andactive participants in the school's Feed the Hungry
out-of-school interests. If you have visited the school,annual campaign.
reference your visit to show that you have made anAnswers like the ones set out above are designed to
effort to learn more about the school. Your answersend a message to school administrators that both
should address each of your child's areas of interestyou and your teen are serious, dedicated and stable
and strength. Here is a sample answer to this question:people who will fit in well with the community that
During our recent visit to the XYZ School, Tommydevelops within a particular private school. If you make
pointed out to me the well equipped science lab andan effort to study the type of community that exists
asked a number of questions about the sciencewithin a particular school and you model your entrance
curriculum available to students at the school. Tommyquestionnaire essay to that community, you greatly
has a long standing interest in studying science and heenhance your child's chances at gaining admission.